Ah, I was so happy to see you here! I really enjoyed your writing the last time around and seeing your name just put a smile on my face. :)
This was good! I like it as a one-off, but I'm also interested in knowing more about this world. I loved how I went from thinking it was set in the past, to being set in the present, to being surprised by it being set in the future. I like this idea of a futuristic story where the world isn't so radically dissimilar from our own, but at the same time drastically different. It's very intriguing to me.
I would like to see you explore this particular world more, if you're feeling it, from the lens of other characters. Maybe life as it is from one of those once-a-month workers. Good work! :)
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Date: 2021-11-01 03:21 pm (UTC)This was good! I like it as a one-off, but I'm also interested in knowing more about this world. I loved how I went from thinking it was set in the past, to being set in the present, to being surprised by it being set in the future. I like this idea of a futuristic story where the world isn't so radically dissimilar from our own, but at the same time drastically different. It's very intriguing to me.
I would like to see you explore this particular world more, if you're feeling it, from the lens of other characters. Maybe life as it is from one of those once-a-month workers. Good work! :)